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Teen Poetry #6

"Romeo and Juliet" Story

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

0 posted 2003-06-13 03:47 PM

No one accepts me wanting to be with you.
But no one sees you like i do.
You're the only one i want to be with throughout the years.
And i would be willing to cry all those tears.
I will do anything just to keep you near,
because together we live, i have no hears.
So if anyone doesnt want us to be, it doesnt matter, because i'll have you, and you'll have me.

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

1 posted 2003-06-13 03:48 PM

Alright, i cant type right, i messed up on the part... Its SUPPOSED to say,..
Because together we live, i have no FEARS,.. but my dumb tail put "hears"... lol... im soo sorry!

idleeyes86
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 64
Somewhere over the rainbow

2 posted 2003-06-13 05:20 PM

Typo's or no typo's its a really nice piece and good for you for the whole thing in general.

Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes

(r.e.m)

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-06-15 04:57 PM

Making me think of my big sis here....she stayed with him and married him, and everybody gave it six months..... They've had their up times and their down times all right -- and they've also had a 40th anniversary....

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