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~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09
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In The Clouds...

0 posted 2003-06-12 10:38 PM


You say you love me but is it true?
Im still waiting to find out if you'll break my heart in 2.
If you hurt me, you'll crush all my hopes and my dream.
But hopefully it wont be as bad as it seems.
I just wanna tell you now so you know how i feel,
because this has to come out and i need to know if its real.


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infinite disaster
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 69
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1 posted 2003-06-13 02:28 AM


wow. i like this poem too. i'm going to keep an eye for ur work b/c i really love it. keep up the great work.
much love, akie.

Manth88
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since 2003-06-15
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2 posted 2003-06-16 01:32 AM


Hey nice poem, I can really relate to that.

!^*Manth88*^!

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3 posted 2003-06-16 10:34 PM


Relationships are a revolving wheel. One day it's all roses, the next you just want to slap the heck out of him. I just don't know anymore.

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

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