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PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

0 posted 2003-06-12 11:04 AM

This poem is kind of long, but read it anyway and let me know what you think. Thanks... hope you enjoy it.
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Days go by like years
Years go by like centuries,
Without you,
Life just doesn’t seem worth much.

Time goes by so slowly,
The days never seem to end.
Going on without you
Is like torture I’ve never known.

The pain just never ends,
Salt pours in the wound,
Every time I see your face,
It’s everywhere I go.

I can’t seem to escape
This prison of tragic fate,
No matter what I do
No matter where I go

You are there
Inside my mind
And tugging at my heart,
Making my eyes well up with tears

I can’t get out
The emotions won’t let go
I hold them back
From everyone

But they won’t leave me alone
Without you, the world seems empty,
It’s dark and cold,
I’m scared, but you aren’t there.

No warmth from you,
There can’t be,
There never will be again
Not after the ill fated turn you took.

Never will you walk
Among those of us living
Not after the driver
Killed you my love.

I miss you so much
No one hears the silent screams,
But your face is always with me,
And your voice is always there.

Without you dear,
The world seems empty.
Without you,
Life seems hopeless.

Your voice is always there
Pushing me to move ahead
But forever will my heart be wounded,
Good-bye my love and I miss you.

I am a hopeless romantic not because I am hopelessly in love and not because love is hopeless. I am a hopeless romantic because I do not see the hop

morgansmiles
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 25
hicksville

1 posted 2003-06-12 05:29 PM

Hang in there jeanettw...you will find your dream man soon enough!

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

2 posted 2003-06-13 04:04 AM

oh wow. that was a really good poem. i'm sorry that ur going through that, i know how u feel. u are a good writer and keep up the great work.
much love, akie.

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