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Loseing A Friend
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Loseing A Friend |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
I am losing grip on reality I am losing another friend They just keep dropping likes flies in the sky I don’t know what I am doing wrong Losing another friend To the jaws of suicide They have all left that way Is it me Is it them Did I forget that they were in pain Did they forget I need them in my life I can’t keep going I don’t understand Why do they do it to me Why am I the one Am I cursed to forever be lonely Will I ever find my way Will the people I love come back to me Will I accept them when they do I don’t know how to cope I’m losing reality As I keep fighting I go more insane But when I stop fighting people worry Should I keep up this act and this battle Or should I just give up I need a friend to cry to I need a loving face I need to sort my feeling My thoughts My memories I could tell you how it is But you would just run away I’m in so much pain And no one understand I’m losing everyone Is it me is it them Can’t find reality Leaving now I have to go To find my friends Maybe ill be back Hopefully I won’t Come and find me crying In the corner But I won’t tell you Good Bye i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
ah, hun. you're not alone, and she's not gone.l promise. you've got people to cry to, little one, and youve got peopel who understand. people who know. l promise. l swear we'renot going to let you go, and if you keep fighting, we'll help you, whether you're crying alone in the corner or not. we'll cry for you even... laurie. ps, this is good. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"I need a friend to cry to I need a loving face I need to sort my feeling My thoughts My memories I could tell you how it is But you would just run away" --------- Hey hey....you've got Lori and I remember? We're right here and we're not going to run away, no matter what you tell us..... We're with you as long as you let us be.... Luv ya, lil angel  Luv, Liz xxx PS: V. good poem "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very good poem. The emotion flows right out of it. Ah, but others do understand. You can always cry I my shoulder, Im a good listener. Feel free to email me anytime you want, just for a good vent. Im [email protected] Things will change someday.  WinterWren |
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