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spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
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0 posted 2003-06-06 08:25 AM



I am losing grip on reality
I am losing another friend
They just keep dropping likes flies in the sky
I don’t know what I am doing wrong
Losing another friend
To the jaws of suicide
They have all left that way
Is it me
Is it them
Did I forget that they were in pain
Did they forget I need them in my life
I can’t keep going
I don’t understand
Why do they do it to me
Why am I the one
Am I cursed to forever be lonely
Will I ever find my way
Will the people I love come back to me
Will I accept them when they do
I don’t know how to cope
I’m losing reality
As I keep fighting
I go more insane
But when I stop fighting people worry
Should I keep up this act and this battle
Or should I just give up
I need a friend to cry to
I need a loving face
I need to sort my feeling
My thoughts
My memories
I could tell you how it is
But you would just run away
I’m in so much pain
And no one understand
I’m losing everyone
Is it me is it them
Can’t find reality
Leaving now
I have to go
To find my friends
Maybe ill be back
Hopefully I won’t
Come and find me crying
In the corner
But I won’t tell you
Good Bye

i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me.

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laurie
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
1 posted 2003-06-06 08:41 AM


ah, hun. you're not alone, and she's not gone.l promise. you've got people to cry to, little one, and youve got peopel who understand. people who know. l promise.
l swear we'renot going to let you go, and if you keep fighting, we'll help you, whether you're crying alone in the corner or not.
we'll cry for you even...
laurie. ps, this is good.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2003-06-06 04:37 PM


"I need a friend to cry to
I need a loving face
I need to sort my feeling
My thoughts
My memories
I could tell you how it is
But you would just run away"
---------
Hey hey....you've got Lori and I remember? We're right here and we're not going to run away, no matter what you tell us.....
We're with you as long as you let us be....
Luv ya, lil angel
Luv, Liz xxx
PS: V. good poem

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2003-06-06 06:43 PM


Very good poem.
The emotion flows right out of it.
Ah, but others do understand.
You can always cry I my shoulder, Im a good listener.
Feel free to email me anytime you want, just for a good vent. Im captainhooook@yahoo.com
Things will change someday.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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