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Teen Poetry #6

cant remember title

a deer in lifes headlites
Junior Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 23

0 posted 2003-06-05 08:43 PM

The mourning sun rises with the death of night
One family smiles at its new addition as another mourns their loss
Just as day brings night life brings death
And just as death brings life night brings day

Ok well, this isn't the poem exactly its from memory because I can't remember (some memory huh lol) where I put it when I wrote it so as soon as I do i'll post it until then I hop you like this one.

a deer in lifes headlites
Junior Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 23

1 posted 2003-06-05 08:52 PM

ok wait I remember it was something like spiral of death or something like that but im sure i'll find the original soon enough.

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

2 posted 2003-06-05 10:30 PM

hey! i really like this poem. i really enjoy ur writing. it kind of brings a new perspective in mind. ur a good writer!
akie

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