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a deer in lifes headlites Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 23 |
Tired of life feeling as though it should end Laying down to die nearing the rivier's final bend Hoping to see you one last time Knowing you could care less if I died with midnights chime Nothing to do but rest my head because, soon, I will be dead |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Welcome to Passions!!! Neat screen name btw, I'm sure everyone feels that way at one time or another.... This is a good write, but I hope you don't really feel so negative about everything. In any case, I wish you lots of smiles, you'll find em here in Passions  Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
hey steve ! good poem ... so thats the way u feel about me huh !? LOL just kidding anyways ill look for more of yours good job *Cassandra |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
interesting. short and sweeet, with a simple overtone of questioning words. l like... laurie. |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
Well, what can I say... this poem made me think alot about myself. Everyone gets down some time or another... This was really good, and keep up the work! "Secret" |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
this is really good. theres alot of feeling all packed in and yet i can see it all clearly. dont give this person the satifaction of knowing they have won. see u around. later i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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