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Teen Poetry #6

I'm Over You Now

LilElmo
New Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 5
illinois

0 posted 2003-07-10 09:44 PM

I'm Over You Now

I'm over you now
This thing is at an end
It actually was over
Before it could begin
I really have no clue
Why i waited this long
My mind must have gone crazy
I knew something was wrong
I have opened my eyes
Now i can see
There will NEVER be anything there
Friends is where we'll always be
I'm done with the torture
Of being alone
Of sitting at home
Waiting by the phone
I'm over you now
This thing is at an end
I knew it was over
Before it could begin
By: Tomeka

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-11 02:00 PM

wow. good for you, wish i could do the same thing. but i guess im stuck with writing about "wish you would come back."

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-07-11 04:42 PM

Good write...I hope to see more of your work.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

3 posted 2003-07-11 07:31 PM

good post

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

4 posted 2003-07-11 08:44 PM

ok so i was just thinking this about my boyfriend since i just got the "we need to talk" email...thanks for the read, now i might have courage to tell him what i feel. great write.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

5 posted 2003-07-12 10:02 PM

yay for meka !
***** five stars for you

CaSSandra

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