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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
After running around Until our feet were swollen We sat and talked, About your band and Goth boys. And I know I’ll end up Falling for someone like that Or maybe like you Except with shorter hair, Who plays volley-ball And I’m grinning from Ear to ear, trying to put “I put your poem on my wall” Into thoughts, but I can’t Because, it’s all about you. I can’t wait until Friday to come, To be in your arms, Because maybe if I hold you Everything will be alright. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This reminds me of myself in someways, thanks for sharing I really enjoyed the read  Andrew |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Not bad. See? Multiple stanzas aren't so scary after all.  This poem has a note of unsureness about its content. I like that, how the narrator embodies the state of mind of the poem. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
but but they are scaryyy -runs and hides- o_0; |
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