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0 posted 2003-05-31 01:42 AM


This is one of the lyrics I was talking about in a previous post. It's also only a first draft, been rewriting it a couple a times tonight, and I think it's almost there. Need to talk to my "Brother" (My Best Friend). Who does most of the rhytm for the lyrics I write. I was going to post some songs for you to listen to, but they got put off for sometime. And we really son't know when we start that op again, because we're going on Vacation to spain in July, with a bunch of friends...So maybe in August/October...Thanks for you interest, and plase share your thoughts about this pieces. thanks!

ps. Sorry for any spelling errors! I'm Danish and not the best or sharpest pen around...

Best Wishes,

Brian.


"I Want To Keep It"
(31/05/03)
© 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

I'm in the kitchen cooking you dinner,
Come weekends we'll do the laundry alone.
I'm a jackpot winner,
'Cause I have you to hold and call my own.
You're more than I'm worth that I get,
Which is why I want to keep it...

CHORUS
I Want To Keep It Sweet, Soft, Carring, Beautiful.
Extraordinary, Mild, Close, Warm, Wonderful.
I Want To Keep It Nice, Growing, Red, Romantic.
Overall Powerfull, High, Loving, Sensitive.

I want to stare into space together,
Drive you anywhere you're legs won't bother.
Know we'll be forever,
'Cause I know we can always go farther.
Love you more each day bit for bit,
Which is why I want to keep it...

CHORUS

It's really hard work but it's not a load.
If you wear my shirt then I'll rock your bode.
People can not get me nakking at you,
Because we share secrets between our hearts.
We'll share the laughter and maybe some tears.
'For death and after I will want you near.
The badest mooding situation blues,
Can not ever tear or breake us apart.
Tear or breake us apart...

CHORUS

© Copyright 2003 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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