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LuckyFelix Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 34Here. |
He's ragin' and cursin' and all sorts a'mad. Ain't never he had it, it was quite this bad. Wreckin' and crashin' everythin' thats around. Breakin' and smashin', such a wonderful sound. The tears flow like water from a leakin' spout. Strikin' anythin' near to him with a vicious clout. Hurtin' and bleedin', his hands hit the floor. Nothin' can take it, when he cant take no more. It's too bad he can't let it out, and has to hide. Hes forced to keep it in, and destroy the inside. [This message has been edited by LuckyFelix (05-30-2003 06:24 AM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Yeah, that does happen sometimes....I've gone through this myself....that was really good.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow...I liked this a lot. This is your first post in awhile, SOOOO I figured I'd reply. Good job. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Good job!  I really like this one...! ~Jess  "What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly." |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Good... ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Woah! I was not expecting that. It's so different...! It's like, rap, almost. Okay, I have to go read that again... after I add you to my library. NICE job... I can't wait to read more!  |
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