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The Glitch
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The Glitch |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
just one moment a single second suspended in air a glitch in time can never be replaced hanging in the balance on the line fall or fly? Never to be relived has come and has gone never to return malfunction deep within creation against creator fighting the meaningless war battling no one but its own fear the fear of itself the fear of incompetence But soft, what light through yonder window break. It is the east, and Juliet is the sun... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Hey, I liked this a lot, the metaphors 'n stuff lol, good job. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Hmmmm... I can't tell you why, because I don't quite know, but I really like that... nice job.  |
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