Teen Poetry #6 |
destroy myself |
Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
right now lifes been... well life has just been to me it's grate that i have that much to say it's grate that you have tried to help and i wnat to give something back but don't expect me to do that much i am fragle standing on the edge of somewhere waiting...wanting to fall to either side i'm here now to destroy myself but you keep me around "there's more to find" you'll say i don't know if i can stand it for much longer if i can take the pain till i get the... whatever the hell it's called i don't care it will just lead to more pain |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this, you might want to check some spelling errors though. But besides that, this was good. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Matt! grrr! Don't give up, you are going to make it through like it's no big deal... rock on my friend ~Talia |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
I agree with Spine Grinder. Good work! ~Jess "If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst |
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