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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-05-29 12:22 PM


right now lifes been...
well life has just been to me
it's grate that i have that much to say

it's grate that you have tried to help
and i wnat to give something back
but don't expect me to do that much
i am fragle standing on the edge of somewhere
waiting...wanting to fall to either side

i'm here now to destroy myself
but you keep me around
"there's more to find" you'll say

i don't know if i can stand it for much longer
if i can take the pain till i get the...
whatever the hell it's called
i don't care it will just lead to more pain

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2003-05-29 05:28 PM


I liked this, you might want to check some spelling errors though. But besides that, this was good.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
2 posted 2003-06-05 05:05 AM


Matt! grrr! Don't give up, you are going to make it through like it's no big deal...
rock on my friend ~Talia

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2003-06-05 06:34 AM


I agree with Spine Grinder. Good work! ~Jess

"If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst

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