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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE 
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My mind is full of questions. I don't know what to do. I never, in my wildest dreams, Thought I'd fall for you. The answers are not coming No matter what I try. The truth is there, staring at me... I can no longer lie. My mouth is dry, my eyes are moist, My lips are numb to move. I want to say how I really feel... But there's too much I could lose.* "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." [This message has been edited by BabieDoll (05-21-2003 04:31 PM).] |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
this is really nice... i like this poem and i'm sure a lot of poeple can relate...  "Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives" |
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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
GREAT POEM.. I can relate to that... but who couldnt? keep up the great work. ~*Carrie*~ "Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me" |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
Very good... I think we've all been there at one point or another. I'm going to thread you to my library, I love your writing! -Erica- |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Well theres really not much to say that hasn't already been said. LoL. Good poem. Jenni There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh, yes... when it's a friendship, and it's between friends or lovers, it's hard. Consider things carefully. Well done! A beautiful read. I really enjoyed this, and can't wait to read more. --Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Friends could make such good lovers...and what a fine line it is. Pity it all too easily goes the other way for a huge loss. I enjoyed this poem a lot, you put your feelings across clearly and concisely. Thanks for sharing Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I've read this before, but I still love it! Great job, hun! Loves. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Very Well Written! |
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