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lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2003-05-16 12:48 PM

First glance, first touch love has struck
First feeling like this, But now hes gone
Thought this is it this is the one, now hes gone

Should I leave it to fate to decide what happens now
I wonder if I'll ever see him again just how
Should I follow my heart what it says to do

should I face this world and relize, hes gone
My heart started to love again, but fell apart so quick
Is there anymore like you out there, or are you the only one?

My mind tells me i am foolish
My heart speaks but love

I felt something different
At least I thought I did
Is this me in love or is it me wanting to be in love

So many things, but to decice what is true
I felt so many feelings when I was with you

But now your gone
Is there a chance I'll see you again?

Nothing you or I could controll
Life happens,as it goes on

So should I then go on as well
forgeting all that once was there
forgeting how i felt?

I cant surpress my feelings cant pretend its fake
I want to say see you later
But will that ever happen?

I wanted you to stay
but instead life took over

So is this good-bye?
Or is it see ya later?

Only fate can tell what direction love takes
So im trusting you fate, please no mistakes.

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

1 posted 2003-05-16 12:33 PM

Aww... I'm so sorry you're having to go through that...

I know how bad it hurts. And how much it feels like it'll never be okay again.

As for the poem... you might check some spelling. But otherwise, awesome job of expressing your feelings.

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

2 posted 2003-05-16 05:27 PM

Love is a great obstacle that we must all overcome. This is the thing that we all feel to help us grow as a person, and to reach out to others.
I thought this poem has a connection with everyone, because, no matter what, everyone experiences some sort of love in their lifetime.

^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~
Immanuel Hermann Fichte

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