Teen Poetry #6 |
THe Cycle |
Truth0fDeceit New Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 3Kansus |
Im Gonna give this another shot guys.. ive been working on it for a few days, any help is appreciated. The Cycle - By Chris Everyday I wish this to end Everynight I Hide In my mind I see your face With a fear I can't subside My love for you ceases As does my life My heartbeat decreases To a hardend strife Why can't I understand this? It's killing me inside Hurt so deep it rips my pride I just want to die Im losing this battle against myself Darkness is taking over So cold it hurts But so hot it burns A clash of Light and Dark And then a bitter rain Nothing to stop this pain Then it all ends |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow what emmotion and what heartfelt lines i loved it!!! robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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Tabitha LeAnn Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50Kansas, USA |
AWWWW BABY I LOVED THIS. ITS SO SAD YOUR GETTING SO MUCH BETTER DONT STOP WRITTING EVER. THIS WAS EXCELLENT. I GUESS YOU CAN BE DEEP, SORRY . GOOD JOB BABE |
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