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Truth0fDeceit
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0 posted 2003-05-13 04:12 AM


Im Gonna give this another shot guys.. ive been working on it for a few days, any help is appreciated.

The Cycle - By Chris

Everyday I wish this to end
Everynight I Hide
In my mind I see your face
With a fear I can't subside

My love for you ceases
As does my life
My heartbeat decreases
To a hardend strife

Why can't I understand this?
It's killing me inside
Hurt so deep it rips my pride
I just want to die

Im losing this battle against myself
Darkness is taking over
So cold it hurts
But so hot it burns

A clash of Light and Dark
And then a bitter rain
Nothing to stop this pain
Then it all ends

© Copyright 2003 Christopher Allen Powers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-13 05:58 AM


wow what emmotion and what heartfelt lines i loved it!!!
robin

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Tabitha LeAnn
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2 posted 2003-05-13 03:17 PM


AWWWW BABY I LOVED THIS. ITS SO SAD YOUR GETTING SO MUCH BETTER DONT STOP WRITTING EVER. THIS WAS EXCELLENT. I GUESS YOU CAN BE DEEP, SORRY .  GOOD JOB BABE
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