dont leave us now (a poem for darkness)

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Teen Poetry #6

dont leave us now (a poem for darkness)

sykopathicfreek
Junior Member

since 2003-04-22

Posts 24
ohio, usa

0 posted 2003-05-09 03:34 PM

im all alone
no one is here
no ones around
i have no home.

im empty deep inside
your leaving me
not coming back
theres nothing i can hide

you will be missed
by me and many others
you have great work
just listen to this

you helped guide me
you helped me through
your not giving up on me
you taught me poetry

please do give up on us
it will be back
no life is perfect
we need you, plus

your a great poet
you have awesome ideas
a smart person
and you dont know it

i may use third grade rhymes
i may get mad at you
but i am quick to forget
so ill ask just one more time

dont leave us now

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

1 posted 2003-05-09 11:41 PM

I'm really not sure what this poem is about exactly. I think I have a faint idea...but otherwise, it's good. Nice job!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

cmonkiki
Junior Member

since 2002-10-18

Posts 11
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-05-12 10:30 AM

Thank You, psychopathic, you told him in poetry what i couldn't even get out in words, face to face.

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