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Paragon
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since 2003-02-16
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0 posted 2003-05-05 10:21 PM


Lets make a group effort to write a poem on the emphasis of anger... I'll start when you add on please copy the whole poem and add on so people can just read the latest one to see the whole poem. Also post exactly 5 words.. no more no less

beginning:

He looks in the mirror

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newguy04
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since 2003-04-23
Posts 17
ohio
1 posted 2003-05-05 10:54 PM


He looks in the mirror
The hatred coming clearer
He wants to bottle in up inside
All his self control denied

Eminem wanna be
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since 2003-02-04
Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri
2 posted 2003-05-05 11:12 PM


......uhhhhhh im not smart enough to write good...*goes off into own lil world*

You can do anything you set your mind to man--EMIN3M
R.I.P.-Zandon R. Maddix 10-3-80 to 10-5-02

BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
3 posted 2003-05-05 11:40 PM


He looks in the mirror
The hatred coming clearer
He wants to bottle in up inside
All his self control denied
Reflection blurred by painful memories
Past realities haunting him
Burning through his heart and soul.

K guys thats all I can come up with...hope its good enough.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

punkrockerrobin
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Sparks, NV
4 posted 2003-05-05 11:50 PM


He looks in the mirror
The hatred coming clearer
He wants to bottle in up inside
All his self control denied
Reflection blurred by painful memories
Past realities haunting him
Burning through his heart and soul
he wants to scream just to make it go away
love,hate,frustration,and the anger
it doesn't want to escape him


ok that's all i got
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

sykopathicfreek
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since 2003-04-22
Posts 24
ohio, usa
5 posted 2003-05-06 09:07 AM


He looks in the mirror
The hatred coming clearer
He wants to bottle in up inside
All his self control denied
Reflection blurred by painful memories
Past realities haunting him
Burning through his heart and soul
he wants to scream just to make it go away
love,hate,frustration,and the anger
it doesn't want to escape him
anger escapes through harsh words

sykopathicfreek
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since 2003-04-22
Posts 24
ohio, usa
6 posted 2003-05-06 09:09 AM


He looks in the mirror
The hatred coming clearer
He wants to bottle in up inside
All his self control denied
Reflection blurred by painful memories
Past realities haunting him
Burning through his heart and soul
he wants to scream just to make it go away
love,hate,frustration,and the anger
it doesn't want to escape him
anger escapes through harsh words
and turns into violent actions
stress relieved through the motions

punkrockerrobin
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Sparks, NV
7 posted 2003-05-06 04:33 PM


He looks in the mirror
The hatred coming clearer
He wants to bottle in up inside
All his self control denied
Reflection blurred by painful memories
Past realities haunting him
Burning through his heart and soul
he wants to scream just to make it go away
love,hate,frustration,and the anger
it doesn't want to escape him
anger escapes through harsh words
and turns into violent actions
stress relieved through the motions
he tries to control himself
but the anger takes control
he can't fight it
the anger keeps growing

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
8 posted 2003-05-06 05:47 PM


He looks in the mirror,
And he sees the sky,
How much he hated her,
He'd rather see her die.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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