Teen Poetry #6 |
The Somber Rose |
FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
There, in a valley of green it lies, Forever frozen in its solemn pose, Surrounded by sadness, dark ties, There it stands, the somber rose. Its petals are blacker than ebony, Its leaves, not green are those, Weighted down by pensive memory, There it is, the somber rose. I happened upon it, in my voyage, Alone, solitary, in the frigid snows, Its moody head, a thinker's age, Barely visible, the somber rose. And so that lowly, mournful, flower, Inspired me to write this prose, In the middle of the afternoon hour, A little thing, the Somber Rose. ------- I wrote this on the one year anniversary of my father's death. It has been one tough year. "A relationship is like a rose, How long it lasts, no one knows; Love can erase an awful past, Love can be yours, you'll see at last; To feel that love, it makes you sigh, To have it leave, you'd rather die; You hope you've found that special rose, 'Cause you love and care for the one you chose." -Rob Cella [This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (05-05-2003 06:37 PM).] |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This is a very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. You had a beautiful choice of words. Nice job. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
this is one of the most beautiful things i have EVER read. This is a wonderful peice and I'm sorry about your dad. hugs. Jenni To hate you must first have loved. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow amazing poem i really loved it. and i'm sorry to hear about your dad. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
I loved that... really nice job of making every other line rhyme. That's hard to do. You could've gotten that into the book - awesome job. |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
that is a truly great poem... |
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