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Swept Away
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Swept Away |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I eat ice cream in the winter and complain about being cold you warm me up as I make you watch crappy VH1 original movies you absent mindedly play with my hair. Coffee and sugar cream, my iced fruit drink and emily's monster, walking in the dark is dangerous without a hand to hold you'll be swept away I want to be swept away. You say I can fall asleep in your arms, you don't mind at all, you know I'm tired and sick. Sweet sugar and you hug me not cold any more, somehow you warm me up. Walking in the dark is dangerous without a hand to hold. stumbling in the dark is dangerous without someone to lead you you'll be swept away I want to be swept away.... "You're the center of adrenaline And I'm beginning to understand You could be the best thing about me." -SG [This message has been edited by Allysa (10-08-2002 09:52 AM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Your poetry always makes me want candy. I swear I'm going to gain weight being such a fan of your work...  I like your original sentence structure, how you add words to sentences for elemental purposes and not necessarily because they carry a specific meaning. Reminds me of Joyce's writing, in a way. Are you a fan of Joyce, by any chance? quote: That's exactly the kind of thing I'm talking about. Really, really creative. Very nicely done, Allysa. It's great to see that you're back where you belong.  See you around, Parasite |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a great read, it's very personal and very cute thanks for sharing a great read  Andrew |
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