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MeMyself&I
New Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 3
indiana usa

0 posted 2003-05-01 05:56 PM

why are poeple afraid of death
why do poeple cry at funnals
i don 't want people to cry at mine
i'm going home on a cloud
seeing angels i haven't seen before
grandpa,aunt kim,and uncle tod
i see st.peter now
wait he gone
i see bight lights and people talking about me
my head hurts
the doctors bought me back to life

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2003-05-01 06:14 PM

HEy Liz this was good! I already read it at school but I think it is very honest and true! Good job!

*Allison*

sykopathicfreek
Junior Member

since 2003-04-22

Posts 24
ohio, usa

2 posted 2003-05-02 08:05 AM

i liked this poem because if i die i dont ever want to be brought back. so its kind of like something i always think about. also i think your idea of crying at funerals is right on. most people are just moving on to a better place anyway right? couple of spelling errors but good write.

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

3 posted 2003-05-02 12:03 PM

I like this!
Its really good and i agree with what you are saying!

Tori

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-05-02 12:07 PM

cool. nice idea for a poem.

Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

5 posted 2003-05-03 11:37 PM

There's a book that I thought of when I read this called 'Tuesdays with Morey'. It has a theme similar to that in the poem, in that people shouldn't cry at funerals.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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[This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (05-03-2003 11:38 PM).]

jayd
Junior Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 13

6 posted 2003-05-04 07:47 AM

i liked ure poem i got what u were saying

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

7 posted 2003-06-22 12:14 PM

I'm not sure how i would react to my death so until then i am not going to think about it. Good poem though!

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

rapturedmist
Junior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 30
USA

8 posted 2003-06-23 02:40 AM

I'm not really sure where I stand on the whole death topic. I guess I just have many views on it to really take a side.
-RM

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