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The First Three Times |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Regret assults me when I am lonely. I wish the past could be even though it can't. I shared with you a special love: Introspective and doomed... I like to think we could once more be two even though we didn't work The first three times. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I sooooo get this!! It's hard to live with the pain of regret- but I've grown to understand that if you hold on too long- you lose sight of those who want to be part of your future. Besides, they eventually call it stalking.  Nice work here... just check the spelling on a few things, and you've got perfection. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (10-08-2002 08:46 AM).] |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow, this is such a brilliant poem, it is very well written and an interesting read  Andrew [5thC]: Making you believe the unbelievable |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Loved the critique message.....I wouldn't exactly know what breaking up is like, because sadly I have never had a boyfriend, but I know it has to be hard.....Great poem....very well written.... Ri |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. |
great poem totalle know the feelins, it sums it up really well. good job. ~~*lil cherry*~~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
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