Teen Poetry #6 |
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The Silence that Speaks |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
The silence that speaks, Between the poet's souls, Weaving and breathing, Flying and living, Flamboyant colors, that streak across. Words on a blank page. The silence that speaks, Drop of water in a pond, Rippling, flying, splashing. The words that mix, Oranges, reds, hues that exist, More breathtaking, than the dawn of a new day. The silence that speaks, In the living, breathing, Eternal Earth, in its, constant cycle, of death, dying, and, in a way, a sort of, escape. It speaks in the flutter, of ethereal angel wings, it speaks in the hustle-bustle, of mortal things. But it speaks strongest, in those, who cannot speak. In the silence that Speaks. ^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ Unknown [This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (04-28-2003 07:00 PM).] |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow awesome poem very well worded i liked it a lot. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Beautiful..Amazing imagery and wonderful word scheme..wow.. ~Live and Laugh~ Always strive for excellence never perfection. |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
Beautiful description, and the wording...Perfect. Great write! I look forward to more of your work. Sing'n Fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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