Teen Poetry #6 |
Only One |
WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
This is one of the first poems I ever wrote and I've decided to post it. Dedication: With undying love for my Grandpa. Only one man can bring a certain joy To the hearts of young children and older children With candy, ice cream, and those special bear hugs, That become so frail with age and those sloppy kisses that become dry with time. And even though the kisses become dry and the hugs frail, And the ice-cream and candy melted and stale, He holds a special place within everyone's heart And with each special place Lies a special memory each different in it's own way Only one man can bring a certain sorrow and a certain pain When the icy hands of time and age take his heartbeat away, Then within each special place and memory Lies a special kind of pain, Only a Papa can have so many different names. As I said, this is an OLD poem so bear with me on the format and such, I was just starting out in the poetry world! WinterWren |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
no need for apologies...the only odd formatting was the constant capitalization througout the poem, but poetry does tend to have it's own rules so it doesn't realy matter...you emotion and spirit were far more important and the poem was very enjoyable...I'm glad I read it. Mike and Jeremy H. Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
I like that... I never knew my grandpa, so I like reading other peoples' experiences with theirs. |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
I think I need to call my grandpa. I really enjoyed this. I still remember being spoiled by my grandpa when I was younger. Hope to see more from you soon. ex animo, Aaron Woodside IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Darling! This was outrageously touching. I loved every bit of it! I'm saving it because I know how you feel, and no need for the apologies. You're a great writer. Hold up that's wrong, an AWESOME writer. I loved this. Tah tah! |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Pssst! Over here...I said I was gonna save it, I forgot so now I'm back to save it...SHHHH...it's librayr work! I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now! |
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