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Struggle agian
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Things get hard every day i try to escape another way demons come from all around and my soule ready to be found being touched from within depression takes hold everytime reaching deeper another demon gets showed and every moment relapses i find myself in an unconshious state serching once agian i find a red lake [This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (10-07-2002 07:58 PM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i like this description of depression, just a suggestion, instead of a red lake i find...i find a red lake, so it keeps the rythym, just because it through me off aat the end, but good write...eor |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
that is what is was ment to be |
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