Teen Poetry #6 |
Musical Bodies |
Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Musical Bodies Caressing softly along your thighs, while staring deeply into your eyes. Perfect like porcelain, your body in motion inside my arms with undying devotion. The lips I kiss upon your face are full and dazzling in sweet embrace. Your fingertips sweeping beside my ear; I hear their magic enchantingly clear. Entire bodies, our bodies in whole- sinking together in one combined soul. Completing our needs in extacy's fashion with musically perfect movements of passion. Completing the needs of our hearts and our minds with pleasure and emotion genuinly combined. J.D.H. Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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Trouble Breathing Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 63 |
Wow. Just..Wow. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Very descriptive, I like it. Good job! ~Jess "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
my God I love this Bel |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
beautiful poem! This is one of your best works. Full of feeling, and emotion. I think the ladies should like this one. Good job buddy! Sing'n Fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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