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Strength & Pride
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Strength & Pride |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
The strength within me Is as deep as I can see And all of the strength i gain Takes out all of my pain When i'm laughing Im crying inside When i sing My screams for help have died And so you see It's all because of me Because I can't stand it All i can do is cry and sit otherwise it takes over and continously I wonder about my strength and pride It lies deep on the inside It's in us all So before you drop your head and fall think of me And you will see On the inside is your strength and pride. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This is a very good poem! There a few minor spelling errors...but that's no biggie!! You did a beautiful job on this! I look forward to reading more of your work! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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