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Peacebri
Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44


0 posted 2003-04-19 10:20 PM



The strength within me
Is as deep as I can see
And all of the strength i gain
Takes out all of my pain
When i'm laughing
Im crying inside
When i sing
My screams for help have died
And so you see
It's all because of me
Because I can't stand it
All i can do is cry and sit
otherwise it takes over
and continously I wonder
about my strength and pride
It lies deep on the inside
It's in us all
So before you drop your head and fall
think of me
And you will see
On the inside
is your strength and pride.

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SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-04-19 11:24 PM


This is a very good poem! There a few minor spelling errors...but that's no biggie!! You did a beautiful job on this! I look forward to reading more of your work!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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