Teen Poetry #6 |
Not much sleep bad for Alex. |
LuckyFelix Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 34Here. |
Everyday, to this poem, I'll add a little bit. Until, of course comes the day, I'm finished writing it. I'll type and type and write and write, for days. if need be, I swear to you, till I be done...Just you wait and see. Blow the whistles and ring the bells, for write, I must do. I'll even stay up past my bed time, just to show you. Six already! This be seven lines, that I did write. Maybe this will be the last one that I write tonite. Nope! I lied! Heres one more I found inside my head. Better hurry, cause I'm sleepy and its time for bed. Oops! Another just snuck out from its cranial home. Now I should get to bed before my mouth starts to foam. ...Oh, just two more, for the road, then I be off to sleep. Ok, ok, heres the last one, now I'll go count sheep. Haha! Gotcha! Heres another...I'm the prankster lord! NOW to sleep before I bash my face off the keyboard.... |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
i loved your poem, it was different then a lot of poems i've read, it's refreshing to read something new Keep up the good work! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
haha, very amusing alex. i liked this. good job. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wide smiles here from the notorious insomniac dubiously called "serenity" I know exactly what you mean! |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
it's...different(in a good way) Jenni You are what you make yourself to be. |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
this is an awesome poem! i luv it! it's definitely different. very cool. |
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