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LuckyFelix
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since 2003-01-17
Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-04-16 10:06 PM



Everyday, to this poem, I'll add a little bit.
Until, of course comes the day, I'm finished writing it.
I'll type and type and write and write, for days. if need be,
I swear to you, till I be done...Just you wait and see.
Blow the whistles and ring the bells, for write, I must do.
I'll even stay up past my bed time, just to show you.
Six already! This be seven lines, that I did write.
Maybe this will be the last one that I write tonite.
Nope! I lied! Heres one more I found inside my head.
Better hurry, cause I'm sleepy and its time for bed.
Oops! Another just snuck out from its cranial home.
Now I should get to bed before my mouth starts to foam.
...Oh, just two more, for the road, then I be off to sleep.
Ok, ok, heres the last one, now I'll go count sheep.
Haha! Gotcha! Heres another...I'm the prankster lord!
NOW to sleep before I bash my face off the keyboard....

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Lindsay
Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59
South Dakota
1 posted 2003-04-16 10:17 PM


i loved your poem, it was different then a lot of poems i've read, it's refreshing to read something new
Keep up the good work!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2003-04-17 06:38 AM


haha, very amusing alex. i liked this. good job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-04-17 05:55 PM


Wide smiles here from the notorious insomniac dubiously called "serenity"



I know exactly what you mean!

BrokenDreams
Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
4 posted 2003-04-17 10:26 PM


it's...different(in a good way)
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

StephyBob07
Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37
Texas
5 posted 2003-04-18 01:45 PM


this is an awesome poem! i luv it! it's definitely different. very cool.
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