At The End of My Pitiful Rope...

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Teen Poetry #6

At The End of My Pitiful Rope...

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-04-15 09:44 PM

Blissful ignorance,
Living in vain.
Striving misfortune,
Deriving through pain.
Hiding your weakness,
No strength to obtain.
Grasping for anything,
But no hope remains.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-04-20 11:56 AM

Mmm...this reminds me of someone. Anyways, short and to the point. Good write homie! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

2 posted 2003-04-20 06:01 PM

I like this one, Its short and gets to the point, it could mean different things for people in different situations....Good writing

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2003-04-20 08:13 PM

i liked this alot megan. the rhyming was great. good job homie u got my vote~

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

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