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Chloey
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0 posted 2003-04-09 02:38 PM



I luv the way you make me smile
And the way you make me laugh
You treat me so good
I wouldn't choose another path

When your far away
I alwayz wish you were near
When I'm all alone
I alwayz wish you were here

Your alwayz on my mind
I think of you all day
I really do love you
No matter what you say

I write what I feel and I feel what I write.

         *~*Chloey*~*

© Copyright 2003 Chloey Jane - All Rights Reserved
Deep_Inside
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1 posted 2003-04-09 03:17 PM


i really like this poem. voted
Spine Grinder
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2 posted 2003-04-09 04:50 PM


hey, I really liked this, i can relate to it very well. good job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Chloey
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3 posted 2003-04-09 07:23 PM


Thanx!

Chloey
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4 posted 2003-04-09 07:24 PM


OOOPS!!! I wanted ta say thanx to everyone who voted for muh otha poem which is gettin put in the book! It is called Normal Again! check it out!
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5 posted 2003-04-12 04:24 PM




(smiles) Oh Chloey, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may this tru luv always fill your heart! (big hugggssssss) This is a true gem perfect for the book, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chloey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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6 posted 2003-04-15 09:17 PM


this is so good it got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SilentTears
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7 posted 2003-04-20 09:23 AM


I really liked this one...and I can relate to it as well. Nice write!
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