Why did you choose to drink and drive?

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Teen Poetry #6

Why did you choose to drink and drive?

SweetGhettoFlurt
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 15
Milw,WI

0 posted 2003-04-02 01:01 PM

How can this 4ever sadly be,
For us to never reach the age of 18,
We will never go 2 college,
The other car we should of aknowledged,
Does he realize how many people he made cry,
I guess all we can do is wonder why,
Y didnt sum1 take the keyz away from him,
2 keep him from this very sad and deadly sin,
Now all we can do is watch down on r friends,
And hope that their sorrow soon ends,
I wish i would tell them 2 care but go on,
After every storm there soon is a sun,
I hope he payz 4 this severly,
Not physically but emotionally,
It is really as bad as it seems,
I will never be able to fulfil my dreams,
I hope u like ur choice better than we do,
Bcuz not only us but r familiez are dieing 2,
Ourz and their hearts are aching painfully,
It wus ur fault but ur still laughing unharmed gleefully,
Ur choice 2 drink & drive made us painfully die,
While it gave u nothing but guilt inside,
R familiez & friendz will cry when our caskets close,
Wish u could change that choice u chose?

*~*[email protected]*~*Marie*~*

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-04-02 02:19 PM

I liked it but I didnt enjoy the way you worded it.

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2003-04-02 05:47 PM

There's almost too much truth in that subject. Sad isn't it? I'd have to agree with Match on how you worded it, but I do like the overall message.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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