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leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-04-01 08:41 PM

I stroll a winding path through the life i lead,
I enter and open garden and plant my lonley seed.

You see but a picture of the face that lies within,
So many see just the surface of whats benethe my skin.

I display a pretty smile to conceal the pain inside,
I sing a silent song to the soul that I hide.

Others see the sorrow masked across my face,
some even offer me a solacing embrace.

I strain my neck to keep my head held high,
I hold hostage my own soul within a well kept lie.

What you see as strenght and courage, I see only as life.
And when others offer me their pity, IT feels like a steel knife.

Is it not unique , my journey through I feel alone just the same,
When no one can remember me , will you remember my flame?


Ashgiel

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2003-04-01 09:28 PM

I'm at a lose for words. Truley one of the best poems I've read in a while. Breath taking, Very well done the emotion within this piece...Jeez I can't even think of a word to describe it, it was that good!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-04-01 09:29 PM

I'm at a lose for words. Truley one of the best poems I've read in a while. Breath taking, Very well done the emotion within this piece...Jeez I can't even think of a word to describe it, it was that good!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-05 04:03 PM

(big hugggssssss) I certainly hope that you are remembered by this special person as you are so deserving of this compassion and comfort! (sigh) This is very sincere and poignant, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-04-06 09:45 PM

Im reall like your work, this one also has my vote, I hope it gets you somewhere!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

5 posted 2003-04-06 09:49 PM

whoa. very very powerful.it has my vote.
Jenni

don't ever let others tell you who you are

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

6 posted 2003-04-07 05:58 PM

This poem is unbelievable. You used wonderful imagery. I am really at a loss for words other than...wow. Very nice write! You definetly have my vote!

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

7 posted 2003-04-07 06:31 PM

this was awesome!!! it's got my vote!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2003-04-07 06:33 PM

leighsa~
You've done a very nice job on this piece,
and I very much enjoyed the read.
Well done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

9 posted 2003-04-17 09:29 PM

Very nice work got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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