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Teen Poetry #6
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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
0 posted 2003-03-31 06:40 AM


Planted.
It slowly grows,
Roots sinking into my
CORE.
Embedding itself,
into my soul.
Capturing the light,
turning everything into
DARKNESS.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.
© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
X Q poet
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 47
1 posted 2003-03-31 06:43 AM

Good... Really good... But a little vague... Could use some hint as to what you are talking about...

But artistically, it is very good... I enjoyed it...

http://www.xqpoetry.com

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