Teen Poetry #6 |
bad boy heavenly boy |
wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
The Jock, the lover, the rebel The sweet, the loving, the angel Which to choose? why must i fall in love with both Holding my hand, stroking my hair my angel, never leaves me Laughing, parties, grabbing the rebel never lets me go I want both, to make them one why must it always be the bad boy their cologne lingers in my room I want to fall in love with one A fork is set out before me a path to choose, which one love, pain, both will come whatever road i choose i am bound to lose " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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X Q poet Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 47 |
Hey... Nice poem... And some dilemma you have there! I can't give you any advice as to who to choose, not unless you would want me to, but the poetry, I can give you some thoughts there if you want... |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Hey, Mal. I enjoyed this one. Not quite sure where it's coming from. but that's alright... lol Anyway, this is probably one of the better ones I've read of yours. Thanks for posting! - Cody - |
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