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Darkfire k'Sheyna
Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 26
Maryland, U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-03-22 10:21 PM



You and I were once close
but now I feel
like we're drifting apart.
It hurts.
I miss you
though I see you every day.
You're always with her.
I turn to you for friendship
but you aren't there.
I turn to you for comfort
but you turn away.
Your rejection
is like a slap across the face.
You're there
but not for me.
Yesterday I was upset.
You ignored it
as if you hardly knew me.
What happened?
Why did you change?
Was it me?
I hate this.
This feeling that we're drifting.
Drifting apart.

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Albino_Jenn
Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-03-22 10:56 PM


Great poem!! I know exactly how you feel!! I hope things work out for you...I feel like my closest guy friend is drifting from me and it really hurts...Just talk to the person I am sure that will help!!!!!Awesome poem!!!!
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

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