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my mind as of today |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
Dropping from space, On the most destructive course I only wish there was another way I've never been free... My life is predetermined, By your whims Want me... Kill me... Then turn your back, And walk away Everynight, I pray for a gun, Just to let it end! Its never enough I'm never enough E N D this -lance this is not enough |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Sitting alone comtepmlating the worth of your life? I do it all the time, and sometimes it doesn't help, it makes everything worse. Wallowing in sadness or anger never helped me much, and to be honest I still do it...knowing it won't help. Hmmmm....the poem on the other hand was very well written i liked the structure at the end, everything was together and sad... Note: if you ever need to talk email me or something. If you don't want, hey...its ok. best of luck sorting through your stuff ReGiNa_ThE_gErInA@hotmail.com "heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
hehe yeah i do tend to do that.. but never sitting around, ive got to many friends to manage cuz they cant keep their lives in order yep it never does help much... hmmm i might email ya.. probably will end up doing just that thanks regina (regina means queen in latin.. YAY for u!!) lol latins the one foreign language i can actually handle well im babbling but thank ya u can contact me at shadow7666@yahoo.com or if u have AIM my sn is shadows7666 -lance |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
This is a great poem, it really makes you think. I hope that all turns out ok for you. You seem like you have a kind heart, and a burdened soul..if you ever need to talk my email is in my profile..Good write..keep up the writing!!!! Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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