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Trapped
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since 2003-03-13
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0 posted 2003-03-13 06:41 PM


Kissing you

Wanting to say hi to you, too shy, you're too good for me
I'm not in your leage
The wind is cold, telling me to leave you alone, stop looking at you
But you're looking back
Give me a sign
Say something
Do something, please?
I feel like such a fool
A fool for you
You go inside your house
Is that your sign?
Are you walking away?
You're leaving the door open, though
What does that mean
I feel like screaming!
I'm tired of the distance!
Or are you waiting for me?
Again you walk away, shut the door halfway
I'm crawling in the mud for an answer!
I feel like crying but I won't!
I'm stronger than that, than this!
Maybe I just can't see what's in front of me
Maybe I should just move on
But then...
But then you smile at me
That beautiful smile
I want to capture that smile and keep it forever
I want to kiss the smile
Kiss your soft lips
But would you kiss back?
I dream of kissing you
But do you dream of kissing me?
Even if you don't I will always dream
I will always dream of kissing you
Only you
KIssing only you
Kissing you

Dedicated to Melina Ramirez by Joel Campana

[This message has been edited by Trapped (03-13-2003 06:44 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Joel Campana - All Rights Reserved
NSnaomian
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1 posted 2003-03-13 06:44 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!
I hope you find a home here.
This is cute piece and a good one to start off with.
I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Lexy
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2 posted 2003-03-13 06:47 PM


This is so cute, its adorable, lucky girl, or at least she will be once you tell her hoe you feel. Welcome! Great poem, I like the part about you wanting to kiss her smile..
Thanks for sharing.
~Lexy

Trapped
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3 posted 2003-03-13 07:17 PM


I did tell her how I feel through this poem
Mysteria
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4 posted 2003-03-13 08:23 PM


I sure hope that she listens, and I would like to welcome you to the circle of friends here at Passions.

           
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Aretha Franklin  

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5 posted 2003-03-13 08:48 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Joel, this is such a  gorgeous and honest debut, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes as I too dream of kissing my dream girl for the first time! (big hugggssssss) Welcome to Passions, dearest friend, yay, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

AJMGW
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6 posted 2003-03-13 11:59 PM


wow. that was awesome buddy!
welcome man.
what's up? ok.
good job. nice first post.
see ya lata
AJMGW

Poet deVine
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7 posted 2003-03-15 03:16 PM


Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.
Kellie_Cantrell
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8 posted 2003-03-15 07:06 PM


Welcome, this is very good!
Albino_Jenn
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9 posted 2003-03-15 07:17 PM


awwww...soooo sad,welcome and keep writing
Jenn

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WhiteRose
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10 posted 2003-03-20 09:06 PM


Very sad write, nicely done.
CSwtThng
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11 posted 2003-03-20 11:51 PM


Really great poem!! If you give her this, I don't see how she could turn you down.
Riley
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12 posted 2003-03-21 08:31 AM


Good job, but you mispelled league.

Riley

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PoeTik JusTice
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13 posted 2003-03-21 12:30 PM


Good poem! It's so cute!!  Welcome to Passions!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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14 posted 2003-03-21 12:35 PM


Hey welcome, well i was on here b4 but just forgot my name and stuff, but anyway i love this piece, Keep goin at it
Echo
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15 posted 2003-03-21 06:38 PM


o, its absolutely lovely.  i love the part:
i want to kiss your smile.
beautiful feelings. it flows good.
  <3

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DawnG
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16 posted 2003-03-22 04:19 AM


I have been in this positition more than once myself as I too am a very shy person. I enjoyed very much.

                        Dawn

carol
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17 posted 2003-04-12 07:49 PM


Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

aaron woodside
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18 posted 2003-04-12 08:58 PM


Welcome, I liked this.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

CwboyAtHeart
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19 posted 2003-04-13 03:50 AM


Welcome! I liked this, I can totally relate...  -sigh-  Thanks for posting, hope you enjoy life around here.

      - Cody -

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SixtiesChick03
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20 posted 2003-04-13 04:53 PM


Welcome!! I really liked this poem; keep up the good work
Mon Cherie
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21 posted 2003-05-05 12:29 PM


Hi Joel!

haha... believe me when I say I totally understand what you're trying to express in this poem... Time again I find myself admiring someone from afar... haha.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

FlyingCloud
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22 posted 2003-05-05 05:44 PM


Great work! Welcome to Passions!

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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