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Kissing You
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Kissing You |
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Trapped New Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 4Florida |
Kissing you Wanting to say hi to you, too shy, you're too good for me I'm not in your leage The wind is cold, telling me to leave you alone, stop looking at you But you're looking back Give me a sign Say something Do something, please? I feel like such a fool A fool for you You go inside your house Is that your sign? Are you walking away? You're leaving the door open, though What does that mean I feel like screaming! I'm tired of the distance! Or are you waiting for me? Again you walk away, shut the door halfway I'm crawling in the mud for an answer! I feel like crying but I won't! I'm stronger than that, than this! Maybe I just can't see what's in front of me Maybe I should just move on But then... But then you smile at me That beautiful smile I want to capture that smile and keep it forever I want to kiss the smile Kiss your soft lips But would you kiss back? I dream of kissing you But do you dream of kissing me? Even if you don't I will always dream I will always dream of kissing you Only you KIssing only you Kissing you Dedicated to Melina Ramirez by Joel Campana [This message has been edited by Trapped (03-13-2003 06:44 PM).] |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Welcome to Passions!!! I hope you find a home here.  This is cute piece and a good one to start off with. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
This is so cute, its adorable, lucky girl, or at least she will be once you tell her hoe you feel. Welcome! Great poem, I like the part about you wanting to kiss her smile.. Thanks for sharing. ~Lexy  |
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Trapped New Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 4Florida |
I did tell her how I feel through this poem |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I sure hope that she listens, and I would like to welcome you to the circle of friends here at Passions. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Joel, this is such a gorgeous and honest debut, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes as I too dream of kissing my dream girl for the first time! (big hugggssssss) Welcome to Passions, dearest friend, yay, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
wow. that was awesome buddy! welcome man. what's up? ok. good job. nice first post. see ya lata AJMGW |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Welcome, this is very good! |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
awwww...soooo sad,welcome and keep writing Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very sad write, nicely done.  |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Really great poem!! If you give her this, I don't see how she could turn you down. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Good job, but you mispelled league. Riley Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl. |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Good poem! It's so cute!! Welcome to Passions! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Antonios Words of Passion New Member
since 2003-03-21
Posts 3 |
Hey welcome, well i was on here b4 but just forgot my name and stuff, but anyway i love this piece, Keep goin at it |
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Echo Junior Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 14the abyss |
o, its absolutely lovely. i love the part: i want to kiss your smile. beautiful feelings. it flows good. <3 eyes see, ears hear, mind believes |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I have been in this positition more than once myself as I too am a very shy person. I enjoyed very much. Dawn |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Welcome, I liked this. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Welcome! I liked this, I can totally relate... -sigh- Thanks for posting, hope you enjoy life around here. - Cody - |
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SixtiesChick03 Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 49NV |
Welcome!! I really liked this poem; keep up the good work |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hi Joel! haha... believe me when I say I totally understand what you're trying to express in this poem...  Time again I find myself admiring someone from afar... haha.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Great work! Welcome to Passions! ^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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