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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-03-12 04:01 PM


Everytime I think of you
a chill runs down my spine
The moments slowly freeze
and then become...memories.

Everytime I think of you
I find myself alone
Nightmares filled with violent fears
pillow drenched by...scarlet tears.

Everytime I think of you
I find myself surrounded
by broken flowers of everyday
send the pain...away.

Everytime I think of you
I become engulfed in flames
that swallow me whole
the pain is killing...my soul.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-03-12 08:21 PM


I really like this one! It caught my attention right away..good write. ~Jess

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
2 posted 2003-03-12 09:15 PM


I really liked this one Staci! Sounds like something I would write. LOL. I think I wrote a poem similar to this, but it's in my old poetry book...the one filled with all the ones I hate and cannot believe I wrote. LOL. Great wording...I like the line about the pillow drenched with scarlet tears. Great job sweetie!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

LuckyFelix
Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 34
Here.
3 posted 2003-03-13 12:15 PM


I like this one, vice nice imagary and its deep...I just saw you in the hall like 3 minutes ago..I wish you'd tell me what I did..but this will be the last time I contact you...it up to you
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2003-03-14 12:56 PM



Spine Grinder~
Very nice job on this piece.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Well done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
5 posted 2003-03-15 09:40 AM


Thanks everyone , I'm glad you all liked this one.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Faceless Pawn
New Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 8
around...
6 posted 2003-03-17 06:23 AM


I know how that can be. Very nice.
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