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Teen Poetry #6

Scars.

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-03-07 02:13 PM

I've begun once again,
with unseen scars,
deep in my mortality.
Buried they'll stay,
for the rest of my exsistance.
Covered by the dirt and stone of age.
Never to be seen again, but never forgotten.

[This message has been edited by LuckyFelix (03-07-2003 04:47 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-03-07 11:38 PM

Great poem, it built up to a good ending.
Very well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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