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Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 147


0 posted 2003-03-04 05:17 PM



I don't want to loose you,
Please don't leave quite yet,
I won't say any "boo-hoos",
But please don't make me fret,
I do not wish for roses,
Or a dinner just for two,
But time's slipping from under our noses,
I just want to be with you,
But if you do choose to leave,
Then I will not sigh,
I'll just reflect that midsummer eve,
When we said we would never say "bye",
But, yes, I am ready,
I'll hold my hand steady,
As you kiss it, I'll cry,
So good-bye, good-bye.

© Copyright 2003 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Chloey
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible
1 posted 2003-03-04 06:10 PM


You Go Girl! Such a good read! I really liked it! Nice Post! Great Write! C-ya at school!

            *Chloey*

I write what I feel and I feel what I write.

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
2 posted 2003-03-06 03:26 PM


That was so touching, I am never ready to say goodbye and that's probably why it hurts so darn much, but anyway, nice read and write.
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2003-03-06 09:42 PM


I don't think I've read any of yours before.
Welcome to pip then, since I didn't get say that before.
This is a really good poem, different from the usual break up ones.(if that is what it is)
I try to be ready for good-bye but it never works, what's your secret?

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 147

4 posted 2003-06-15 10:01 PM


Thank you all sooooo much for reading my stuff.
~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09
Posts 65
In The Clouds...
5 posted 2003-06-27 04:32 PM


Girl, this was a great poem! It made me think of *Maurice* And i wish i could have that kind of strength but your poem helped me... keep tha good work and hope ta see u soon...
~*BayBee*~

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