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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
If I hate you, then why is us not talking killing me. I act like I could care less, but both of us know thats not true. Im sure I hate you, after making me cry like this. If love you, then why dont I tell you anything. I could always trust you, but this time, it's different. I think I love you, 'cause if I dont, then I dont know what love is Im having mixed feelings for you, I dont know what to beleive. I know I love you, yet I hate you. Which of those, are real? Whenever I talk to you, a smile creeps onto my face. Sometimes when I think about you, I cant help but cry. Im confused, so i'll force myself to believe both. [This message has been edited by Pollita (02-22-2003 04:33 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Delaney, you know what they say, love is never perfect, so of course there will be obstacles in the way but if you and your love can sort out the difficulties, then you know it is true! (sigh) Follow your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Delaney, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Love certainly has a way of pulling us in all directions at the same time. It's quite a ride. Take it one turn at a time. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Thank you for your replies. Noah Eaton: No love isn't perfect, But what ever is perfect? Your such a sweety!!! Chanson: Yup love tends to do that, annoying as it may seem. Yeah, I think I'll take your advice, Thank you. * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wonderful, Dels! I love this one...you express your confusion with great clarity for one who thinks she's in a haze... (((((hugz))))) Where have you been lately? I havent seen you for a while...hope everything goes well with you... Love, Liz xxxxxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
i loved your poem, it's something i can really relate to good job and keep writing |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
umm...yeah that pretty much describes my situation. thanks for the read. Jen To hate you must first have loved. |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Some say that love is pure emotion---and love, no hate. Others...say that it's an equality and greatness of both forces. Whichever works out for you, is for you to decide. Love is often confusing and full of pain, but if you fight for it---it ALWAYS pays off in the end. The world is good, and nothing bad ever happens! |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
You know....I related to that like perfectly..I feel the pain, and that was so wonderfully expressed, great job!!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*big hugs* is all I can say |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Awww...this is a very bitter-sweet poem. You may have a few spelling and grammar mistakes...but other than that, this was a really good poem. Nice job! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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