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History... this one is brief but to the point
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History... this one is brief but to the point |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Leave me alone You follow me from place to place Let me go Get out of my face No matter what I do They will not forget about you You are the Former- Me You are my history |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Heh.... hey newbie. Definetly short, but you are right, to the point. While I might've taken the potential for a longer poem and run with it, I can see why you went for a short one. Shorter poems, when written right, can contain a punch. I hope you're enjoying yourself here.  ~Titus  "On the plains of Hesitation lie the blackend bones of countless millions, who, at the verge of victory, sat down to wait, and waiting - died." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I absolutly love this. You're right, short but impactful. Try not to regret. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
i'm glad you kept this one short its best this way. |
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