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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571
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invisible am i invisible? like the words to this poem? |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
i am soo sorry ppl. i don`t know what i was thinkin wheb wrote this. obviously not much. maybe u guys can translate it all funky and make it sound really deep. lol |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is a masterpiece! I am drowning in depth...  quote: That was my favourite line. You so perfectly inquire an absent party. This form of apostrophe is extremely effective. Your talent comes through with this piece. Keep up the great work! Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
OH..MY..GOD... I cannot believe these words have come from you, dear sweet, allison. If this were any deeper, I would dround. I'm with parasite completly. "Slowly move on..how did we get to here? It all went wrong..gravity claiming all your tears." |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Wow. This was short but really good. I liked it. A lot. *~erin~* "You write the lie you want to be when your life looks like a book you wouldn't read."-Jets To Brazil |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
a very very very clever poem, am extremly impressed, I agree completly with what the others have said, well done Anya |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
all i am saying is Wow! love sis |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Im invincible!... *bonks LP on the head* be nice  Are you scared? |
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