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Teen Poetry #6

grandparents

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2003-02-15 03:40 AM

hey y'all, i haven't posted in awhile..but since i'm in creative writing poetry class i figured meh, wot the hell? i know it's not the best stuff in the world, but i am bored. have fun. happy valentine's day =)
grandpa is too skinny to be Santa,
he carries violence in his goody back.
although,
if no yellow hints of tabacco,
showed in his snowy beard,
the two could pass for twins.
grandma is his opposite,
she is overly bright and cheerful,
like a Christmas tree,
purchased from a gas station,
on Christmas Eve.

-bergundy-

"crack my head open, on your kitchen floor. to prove to you, that i have brains." -Alkaline Trio

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2003-02-15 03:46 AM

hey,
okay the first line of the poem is supposed to be 'grandpa is too skinny to be Santa' this thing is being dumb and not letting me edit it. so maybe one of the moderator-y people could be a doll and do it for me? thanks. =)
-bergundy-

"crack my head open, on your kitchen floor. to prove to you, that i have brains." -Alkaline Trio

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