Teen Poetry #6 |
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Propaganda |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
We seek to gauge opinion To trap it in fractal reason Hold the truth in a number A two dimensional fact With no edges to it A flat pack fact Pre-packaged Easy reference That is taken as truth. We seek to lock intention Within a cell of convenience Hold the key of invention Shape the lock to fit Preponderated possibilities Remodelled modus operandi A prefabricated excuse An easy lie That is taken as truth. There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"? |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Another great one! can't say anything else, just great!!! |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
What I have to say is said... -You know what I'm thinking- Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I don't know who you are, but i like how you think and write. jenn |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Another good one! Great job. I especially like the lines, "We seek to lock intention, within a cell of convenience." Im liking what you're writing! WinterWren |
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chester Junior Member
since 2003-11-01
Posts 11 |
Yes, I found this to be excellent! (A nice subtle change to my own bearish efforts!) I particularly liked "A flat pack fact" - that has quite a ring to it. *) Hey, who's this imposter up there! *) |
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