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Teen Poetry #6

Argue Dopamine

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2003-02-07 05:32 AM

I spoke my thoughts as they formed,
words no sooner past my lips than mourned,
to shatter on your stubborn grace.

A discourse.

A thousand words that cannot be recalled
designed to cut, to score and scald,
that I had sharpened like a razor blade.

A discourteous discourse.

For now I cannot surely differentiate
between the things I said in haste
and those words I truly meant.

A disastrously discourteous discourse

An opinion cannot be withdrawn
just because your audience is born
to a western school of thought.

A denigrating disastrously discourteous discourse

You may as well explain dopamine
to a flower by a secluded stream,
than argue with a public dream.

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

[This message has been edited by Triskaidekaphobia (02-07-2003 05:43 AM).]

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2003-02-07 09:40 AM

Yet another very good one. I loved it!

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