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Teen Poetry #6

Blueberry Lipstick Stain

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2003-02-06 11:30 AM

Her rain,
Sticks to her hearts windowpane,
Like aBlueberry lipstick stain.
His pain,
Constantly drives him insane,
Like aBlueberry lipstick stain.
Love's a universal candy cane,
That every person strives to contain.
But doesn't always remain,
Like a blueberry lipstick stain...

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2003-02-06 11:55 AM

Wow coolnessity!!! I liked this one it flowed well it sounded like rising action in a song right before everything kicks in and the beats start. You know when you're at a concert and the band has that intro that gives your heart a little jump because you know when the singer is done singing this it's on!?

This piece gave that feeling!
Great Job

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