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Teen Poetry #6

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Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2003-02-06 12:10 PM

Imagine the globe as a penny.
Everything presses to it
In a gravitational flux.

This is the fuselage
Of the stars.
Yet it often appears
That solar flares
Deconstruct light
Before my eyes
Just like the mirror reflects
The thoughts in my head.

The reverse of the coin.
As night falls, light dawns
In a geothermal abstract.

This is the matrix
Of my construct.
Although it often seems
That teratogenic material
Reforms life to fit
My withered ideals
Just like the mirror reflects
The colour of my dread

The edge of the flip
Turns us sepia toned
In a twilight reality

This is the phase space
Of my grace
Yet it often seems
That youthful dreams
Have a propensity
To ride tachyons
Just like the mirror reflects
The dreams of the dead.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-02-06 12:13 PM

wow...very interesting read! and welcome to pip!!

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

2 posted 2003-02-06 12:06 PM

Holy Mother of Someone Devine in Nature!!!!!
This was awesome, I don't know what to say.
The use of words, the flow, everything I didn't want it to end!

You wouldn't happent to be familiar with the band MuDvAyNe because you have a very similar style of writing that they do. I don't know this just reminded me of them.

Anyway Welcome to Passions
I have the feeling that you will be a success here!!

Darkness

The devil and ghost will protect you on your journey through life.

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