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A Letter To Captain Cuddles
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A Letter To Captain Cuddles |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
I've heard people say That everyone deserves A second chance That it's always good To forgive and forget But I never make it That far past the Break up I tried to be thoughtful And show you How much I care I never meant to Be as selfish As in the past I took into consideration Your feelings, As well as mine You broke my heart I bruised your soul We're even That's what I Wanted to believe Then I thought About it a while And this is my conclusion You lied, and You cheated, not me I begged you To forgive the things I didn't mean to say To forgive me For handing you My fragile heart Taking my feelings Taking your feelings All too seriously I cried alone Because of you If it's not one thing It's definitly the next But dam*it I have feelings too I'm tired of hurting And feeling so dirty You won't open up And tell me how You feel inside How you feel About me About us So how should I know that you really cared? How should I know You didn't just use me Like everyone else? You said a lot of things That you swore You really did mean But how am i Supposed to know It wasn't all a Basket of lies? Everywhere you touched I'm afraid to go Afraid I might catch A whiff of your cologne Or that I might remember Your blue eyes Looking over at me But I'm deathly afraid Of seeing your face Your body Laying on my bed I'm scared that When I call you You'll be home, and I'll hear your voice You are my weakness My worst fear, and The one thing I miss having around There is nothing To stop my tears To stop my bleeding Yet I was willing To catch you if You happened to slip I'm not going to say How dark and scared I feel on the inside Because I don't Want your pity Or your sympathy I'm sorry about All the things gone wrong So I've stopped Fighting this battle and I've surrendered To this war No use in fighting For you anymore You've obviously moved on Seeing as how You avoid my phone calls Then don't ever Return them Because in all reality I don't know anything About you, or myself But I believe in you I care about you I miss you, and I'll always be here Waiting for you. -Erica- |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow... That was long, and at the beginning, I thought it was going to be just another poem. However, you proved me very wrong. This poem speaks to me, on a very personal level. I liked it very much.  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Hey Erica! I already told ya I like this one, but I'll tell you again. I like it. It was definitely felt from the heart. Anyway, glad you were finally able to post this. - Cody - |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
This was an excellent write. I loved the emotions and everything about it. I have a suggestion/question. Were the short lines for a purpose or is it a song and that`s why? If not it just made it kinda harder to read but it did keep me in suspense to see the next line when I was scrolling down Good write and keep it up!*Allison* "O My love Please don`t cry I`ll wash my bloody hands And well start a new life" -Good Charlotte [This message has been edited by devinechild22 (01-28-2003 08:29 AM).] |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
i liked this poem alot even tho it was long and i dont usually get thru long poems but i read this one and i really liked ur name too!!!  CATHY "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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