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lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2003-01-25 10:57 PM

I’m wrong
You’re wrong
The world is wrong

Everything’s messed up
Nothing works the way it should
It’s all just a blur

Light and dark
Dusk and dawn
The misunderstood middle ground

How can anyone be truly right
We don’t know all the answers
It’s all a matter of opinion

Backwards forwards
Up and down
Which is wrong, which is right

I’m wrong
You’re wrong
The world is wrong

I’m the misunderstood middle ground
I can’t make you understand
I can’t make you believe

That none of us are really wrong
There’s a hidden shadow to everything
Something left unseen

It’s no ones fault
There’s no one to blame
Just walk away

Forget everything
It’s useless to you
They’re feeding you lies

The world is wrong
I’m the misunderstood middle ground
And you can’t have me

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-01-25 11:06 PM

I like it. A LOT. The middle ground thing is just.. a GREAT idea. It's just so very very good I really enjoyed reading it and it really has purpose which is really good.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-25 11:15 PM

Woah, that was really really awesome!
That was just such a cool idea for a poem!
I really LOVE this one! I especially liked the line, "There's a hidden shadow to everything, something left unseen."
Great Job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

3 posted 2003-06-04 11:57 PM

i'd still like to hear a lil more about this one. thanks for the compliments tho.
~~*lil cherry*~~

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-05-07 04:55 PM

Awesome.. I loved it. The whole i'm wrong your wrong were all wrong made me think of ice cream for some reason though! ~lol~ that I scream You scream We all Scream For ICECREAM!! (hehe) Sorry, i'm a little HYPER right now.
kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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