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Teen Poetry #6

Special Feeling

Trouble Breathing
Member

since 2002-11-12

Posts 63

0 posted 2003-01-25 08:26 PM

Spend my life searching for that feeling,
Never knowing when it’s going to come,
Never knowing if it will come out all

Now that I’ve found you,
I know you’re what I need,
I want to love you forever,
And then a little bit more

I could hold you forever,
And never let you go,
I want to be with you forever,
I love more than you’ll ever know

I’m glad you love me too,
Because if you didn’t,
I wouldn’t know what to do
So let’s spend forever together,
And let our love be free like a feather

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

1 posted 2003-01-25 08:31 PM

great poem.

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WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
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2 posted 2003-01-25 08:53 PM

I like this one, very good job.
"I want to love you forever, and then alittle bit more." Great line.
Well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Silent~Inspirations
Junior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 13

3 posted 2003-01-25 09:38 PM

I liked your poem. I thought it was very cute. I'm happy that you didn't over do it with imagining because sometimes love poems are over loaded with them. Great poem!

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